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ReliefIts like I try to write so that I can get good critical feedback, but no one comments (and to those that do, thank you). I feel that poetry on DA is not the best, most people are interested in visual art or photography. Honestly, its prob cause my work isnt that good. However, without critical feedback its impossible to get better. So i guess ill just think about it for now.
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A Wall DividedStanding at this wall Divided in two right or left, the options clearA Wall Divided
do these ears care to hear?
The troubles of fiction in a script no one wrote for faint feelings cant hide the weight I tote
Pacing in circles deciding the path only center mass will extinguish the wrath
My plea is weak the motive starved this decision is haunting yet the stone lay carved
The journey is grim dark and unknown further into the shadow for my guide will be shown
by ~Dishonestnation
In What World Do I BelongThe anger seeps as the echoes sweep on gentle ears that can bare no moreIn What World Do I Belong
A hate arises and the mood is clear lips sewn shut as she fights back the tears
The red runs thin and the thoughts seem nomadic, fixed on sin
This blame sits high atop shoulders, reaching skies the weight sinks in as an achor, bound within
In what world do I belong and what distance will it take to reach this divide and make my leap to the other side
by ~Dishonestnation
The CoreWith valiant eyes I watch the lust these lips keep Staring deeper with passionate intent the need to turn is nearThe Core
Step through shadows I set myself apart fight the temptation with words then gallop the distance in regret
Separate from you I am not a being of life to remark the core of pride inside this chivalrous core
Forget the reason of me live with the care of self hold my passion deep keep it close and locked away
Together as one are bodies embrace bathed in peace and brilliance alive with the spiri
by ~Dishonestnation
Flat Linesilent beats in a steady chest the hand grasped firmFlat Line
this breath subsides
wonders and illusions fill my head holding every thought
this mind divides
further to the core as visions fade your name stays close and memorys replayed
this life collides
With energy in air white lights and sounds of despair
your world is gone and mine has begun
by ~Dishonestnation
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